Soul Eater The Visit (5M, 5F, 2M/F)
rawrchild for Liz Thompson
Voice Type: Moderate, Teenage, Friendly, Easy-going
Bio: The Elder sister of the Thompson Sisters and is one of Death the Kid's weapons. While Liz can be a friendly and easy-going young lady she frequently gets annoyed by Death the Kid's personality particularly his obsessive fixation with symmetry. But still both she and her sister Patty do genuinely care for Death the Kid as a dear friend especially since he did save them from a life of poverty out on the street. But still when she is not with Kid she is actually very good friends with Tsubaki since she can relate to her about all the stress regarding taking care of a smaller boy with numerous personality issues.
1. (Pleasant & casual) Hey there Tsubaki, what’s up?
2. (Slightly amused) *snicker* Oh really?3. (Defensive and nervous) Only once and I was dru… uh what I mean is that is beside the point dear sister.
4. (Understanding and a little playful) Oh I hear you Tsubaki, trust me I know a thing or two about how frequently babysitting a smaller boy who means well but can be quite the handful.5. (Happily offering a friend a good time) But still say Tsubaki want to head out somewhere with Patty and me, we’ll treat you to a nice little girl’s night out.
6. (Eager and a little flirty) Perfect, us single moms got to stick together you know.
+ Voice is pretty good, and your delivery on the lines are not bad, I liked your takes on Lines 1 and 5. - However your takes on Lines 3 and 4 could use a bit more energy. (That and you didn't do the snicker on Line 2.) Still this was fairly good nevertheless.
Would you like me to retry those lines differently and resubmit them :)
Sure