Soul Eater The Visit (5M, 5F, 2M/F)
spiritkitten for Black Star
Voice Type: Moderately High, Rough, Boyish, Bombastic, Well-Meaning
Bio: Black Star is Tsubaki's Weapon Meister who is a very loud-mothed energetic young boy who aspires to be the best fighter. While he is quite naive and doesn't seem to be all that bright he can be a highly skilled fighter. Not too mention how while Black Star may be rather brash he does treat his Weapon Partner Tsubaki well like a surrogate Big Sister. He is also an old friend of Maka's since childhood and will pretty much do anything she tells him to and is always willing to help her out. (Sometimes leading viewers to think he maybe a little sweet on her.) Anyways in this story while he and Tsubaki are visiting Soul & Maka he puts on a pair of Maka's panties on his head mistaking them for a frilly cap in which things get more chaotic from there.
1. (Eagerly introducing himself) Hi everybody Black Star is here!
2. (Confused) I suppose, but what are those cup things for? Is that some sort of sling for hurling rocks?3. (Shocked and a little flustered) Wa…Wait a minute! *as he takes the panties off and now holding them* This is… This is your… *as he is starting to blush* your underwear? *Brief Pause* Wow they really do feel nice…
4. (Proud of himself) Yep it’s all a part of my stealth training which is why I try to sneak up on Tsubaki when she is at the Hot Springs.5. (Defensive about Maka) Yeah Soul, Maka has a perfectly cute butt!
6. (Cheerful and innocently naive) Hey Mr. Albarn, I got a funny story for you. You see just earlier today I was trying to get into your daughter Maka’s panties. I had a little bit of trouble at first but I managed to pull it off, isn’t that right Maka? *Spirit hangs up the phone, brief pause* Hmm? Mr. Albarn? Mr. Albarn? That’s weird Maka, your dad hung up the phone. Do you have any idea why he would do that?
+ Well your take here is very spirited I'll certainly give you that. While I could consider your voice a bit forced but to be honest thats kind of par for the course for Black Star here so I'll allow it. (Though at times he did kind of sound like one of the Toads from Super Mario Bros., though I hope that voice doesn't cause too much strain to your vocal cords). But still your voice and performance suit the role rather well. - However your attempt at pronouncing "Albarn" is a bit inconsistent, I can kind of understand Al-Barn but Al-Born? Personally I'd go for Al-Bern but thats a minor detail. Still this is rather good nevertheless, though I hope this doesn't strain your voice too much.
thank you for the feedback, and yes it is a little rough on my throat, which is why water has become my very best friend, (I actually voice him for an abridged series, and as long as I don't have long paragraph lines I'm fine. hehe...) Also I never figured out how to correctly pronounce Spirit's last name. I will try and be more consistent in the future.