I apologize for the delay on this feedback! I recommend slowing way down. It sounds like you are the one racing instead of Robin! If you take your time more, it would allow you to focus on saying each sound in each word separately; right now your sounds are too blurred together. Try working on your pacing overall. Also, watch out for your breathing, and make sure each breath is planned and consistent! Overall, I like how you handled your mistakes, and I like the take. Nice job!