Sorry for the delay with this feedback! I like the voice a lot! It's a unique style that is a mix between a character read and a narration style. I would recommend slowing way down to focus more on articulation, because your R and W were not different enogh for me, and I think this could be a fairly easy fix if you just took your time more! Also, some of your words feel a bit too "breathy" to me. Try not to waste too much breath in your words! Overall, great work.