The Last of Us: Notes and Letters VO (PAID)
zeddall for Voice Over Role
Ish keeps his mind on the white whale that is the goodness in humanity.
One open door. That's all it took. One of us forgot to close a door and a horde of those monsters entered our camp. We shut them in there and wrote a warning on the outside.
Susan and a couple of the kids are with me. As far as I know, we're the only survivors. I had to hold Susan so she wouldn't run back in there ā go back for the bodies. It's just too dangerous. She lost her children, and I have no clue what to say to her.
Every part of my being just wants to give up. It'd be so easy to surrender to this world. I can't do that, though. I have too much faith in humanity.
I've seen that we're still capable of good. We can make it. I have to stay strong... For her.
ā Ish
Great submission! The emotional journey is really clear here and you're really in touch with it. I think you can go further with how hard it is to handle this trauma. Make these moments Ish's hardest. Make it extremely hard for Ish to choose to keep fighting. Lmk if this doesn't make sense!
Thank you so much! I definitely get what you mean! I'm always looking for ways to improve so this is very helpful, thank you!