Eragon
stevewhite81603 for Garrow
Voice: A gruff voice, think of a farmer who spends his time yelling instructions.
Character: He is the uncle to Eragon and the father of Roran. He loves them both very much. He is also a very proud man.
(very angry {his pride has been wounded}) You let him pay for it? I told you before, I won't beg for our food! If we can't feed ourselves, we might as well move into town. Before you can turn around twice, they'll be sending us used clothes and asking if we'll be able to get through the winter.
(worried) Tomorrow you'll have to help Roran finish harvesting the barley. If we can get the squash picked, too, the frost won't bother us.
(softly to Roran and Eragon) Consider yourselves fortunate. I have heard this tale only twice in my life. If the Empire knew that Brom had recited it, he would not live to see a new month.
I absolutely love your voice. Solid acting and voice work throughout. I did notice that you mispronounced Roran's name. It's Ror-an. Not Ronan, which is what I heard. You also changed a few of the words, like in the first lines, you changed might to may. Normally that would be ok, but in this project, I need every word to be word for word. Otherwise, don't worry about anything else, you are an awesome actor!
thanks... i can re-do if you want..... if cast word for word it will be
No, you don't need to redo, I love what you posted. :)
ok... thanks