OMG - IN LOVE WITH YOUR SLATE - great work. You'd have won them over right there and then. Celebrity cruise is good but it's not completely flirtatious, but it's very interesting so I like it. I would want to direct it to be a bit more fun flirty a bit so it was a bit more approachable. You missed sarcasm, but I LOVED what you did with flat. It wasn't totally flat but rather more sarcastic but I LOVED IT - good stuff -