Danganronpa: Shattered Memories
Grief for Mizu Hatori (Ultimate Aviculturalist)
Age: 18
Gender: Male (he/him)
Personality: Always apologizing and often sounds nervous, thinking no one likes him. Is also somewhat naive due to his lack of education. Can be a little childish, and sometimes does things considered outrageous to try to get some attention. A bit of an early riser, he's someone who likes to watch the sun rise while hanging out with his bird friends.
Voice: medium to high male voice; sounds nervous a lot, but can also sounds just a little childish at times as well.
[starts sounding slightly wary and surprised, before sounding a bit sheepish when apologizing; energetic and excited when talking about himself] You... you want to know about me...? Oh, no, I'm happy to tell you about myself, please don't leave! ...Sorry, I'm not used to people asking about me... Um, well... my name is Mizu Hatori, and I'm the Ultimate Aviculturalist! You might be wondering what that means, and it means I'm passionate about birds!
[excited at first and a bit childish and teasing; turns awkward] Yuma! What'cha doing in here? I noticed you don't tend to hang out with the others that much, and decided to come hang out with you, cause I figured you might be lonely, and are just shy~ hehe~ Well, you are very welcome to be blessed with my presence! ...ah, sorry... I guess I sounded a bit full of myself... sorry...
[panicked, having just woken to find you're tied to a chair and can't talk] mmm... mmph...? MMPH!!! *erratic breathing as gag/ducttape is removed* What...? I- I don't know what I did, but I'm sorry! Please...! I don't know what's going on! (hears laughter) ...A-Aberra...? Why...?!
Hey! I know you didn't ask, but I figured I'd give you a little feedback if you'd like, whether you might want it for future auditions, or if you might want to try submitting another audition. For the first set of lines, I would say maybe try to sound a little bit more excited when explaining what an aviculturalist is. Overall, I'd say you just sound a little bit breathy in places, mainly when you try to suddenly be a little higher pitched. Lastly, I'd say for the last set of lines, you might want to try emphasizing the emotions there a bit more. Having been kidnapped, Mizu should be really panicked, and probably a bit confused as well. I do think your voice could fit this character pretty well though, especially if you sounded a bit less breathy and could emphasize the emotions a bit more in some places. If you want to try submitting another audition with some of this in mind, you would probably get the part!