Ok thanks for that insight Sean. Demon King: great character work and love the energy and voice. Feels a bit shallow and what the reason behind inventing the 5W's to deepen the scene. Feels like there is very little in the moment to react to authentically as it stands now. OTTER: Great contrast in energy and delivery. Maybe some life sounds of smelling/eating the food? How do you know this is dangerous? How do you know the listener? Things to consider to make your strong work and choices even deeper.