You have a very nice voice for this assignment. Your enunciation is mostly solid throughout the read, but there are a couple of places where you stumble a bit and it's not as clear (ex. Peculiar). Good read!

My main feedback for you is to slow it waaay down! Right now, it doesn't sound like you are trying to read an exciting story for a group of children who are hanging on every word. It sounds more like you're reading a monologue from a script. To help with this, try smiling while reading; you may not think this makes much of a difference, but a smile can be easily heard in any recording. Also, try loosening up a bit and use your entire body to sell this performance. Energy and excitement should be flowing through the screen! Your articulation was mostly solid, although there were a few slip ups here and there mostly due to the fast pace of the read. Great job!