I don't think I have anything constructive to comment, which is my problem to improve on. Just wanted to let you know that I think your enunciation is SPLENDID, but you may want to raise your audio by 5 times or so. It's very soft compared to the norm.

Hey, well done with this one! Your main flaw here is your lack of articulation. "PeTer" "PaDDerton" and other words feel blurry and harder to understand, partially because of the speed of the read, but also because I get the feeling you aren't using enough of your mouth muscles while performing. Add more passion and try opening your mouth even more, utilizing every piece of your body to offer a truly EXCITING performance. If you do so, I think you'll find that not only will your articulation improve, but the read overall will triumph leaps and bounds over your previous one. I loved the nature of your voice and the way you speak, so don't feel like you have to give that up in order to make these additional elements happen. Great work!