Your articulation is super good! It still needs work, but you're definitely bringing out the clarity of each word in comparison to what I usually hear. Your pacing helps a lot with this, not fast but also not super slow! Make sure your pronunciation is correct, there were a couple of words that were blurred together, making it hard to understand by listening. Also, I think adding a layer of energy would make the read even more exciting and fun to listen to! Nicely done though, I really enjoyed this.