Hi Ryan! Your performance was fun to listen to and kept my attention from beginning to end, I loved your enunciation at certain parts, and your pronunciations sounded fine to me as well! Great job!

I love how to occasionally add that slight gruffness to emphasize of certain words and phrases. :-D

Nice read! Make sure you're pronouncing your words correctly (you said "particular" instead of "peculiar") as this is something that clients will notice right away. Your energy is great! It feels like something kids would gather to, and your tone of voice makes me want to listen all the way through. Your articulation was overall fine, but I do feel like adding a bit more of an over-articulating style to your sounds would make it better for the purposes of the assignment. This ended up being a great read! Well done.