Hey I think your read is great! Some feedback is your enthusiasm sort of falls off in the middle. I feel like it'd have been better if you kept it consistent. Also something else I noticed, when you were editing, you cut some of the sounds off of the letters and words. Just watch your razor, and let the whole word ring out. Anyway, you've got a great sound keep up the good work!

I really like the creative and natural flow you use here! This sounds solid. My advice for you is to work just a bit more on your articulation, it feels like your "T" sounds" in particular could be empahsized a bit more, especially since that is the primary focus of this assignment. The tough part will be adding more clarity while also keeping up that natural flow. Great work, this was fun!