I love how clear your voice is, and how well you’re able to deliver the yelling lines with that diction. Very nice!

OMG I can't wait for the next class - YAAAAY. thank you Thanks so much for submitting. I'm grateful that you switch it up a bit - "I can't forget that we had something". Then you get back to yelling/begging him to listen. We have to be careful because you make an emotional choice and just stay launched in it. You almost go in and out of it which is great - most stay in the same place the entire time so you at least internalized every once in a while - so keep that up. Then built it up 'YOU FELT NOTHING" Then loved how you took it down - I feel sorry for you mark....that's the way - keep taking me on an emotional journey. I would want to direct this a bit in some spots but I appreciated that you didn't stay in the same place throughout - so good first read here