I think it was really good! The only thing that I would say is that sometimes when you started a word with a "p" it kind of popped in the mic and it wasn't a great sound, but other than that, it was great!

Nice read! Try to slow it down a bit to not allow your words to slur together, sometimes the beginnings and endings of certain words sounded like they were connected when there should be a cleara separation. Focus on your clarity by taking the pacing down a notch and practicing the exercises discussed in class. Aside from that, really loving the energy, feel free to raise that bar even more to convey the passionate sale! I was impressed with your breathing too, well done. Keep it up!