Project C13 - Original animatic storyboard
arvil143 for Mack
Mack's a good guy, but he's got edge. He's always light-hearted and easy-going.
He speaks confidently and as though he's amused by everything going on around him.
You aren't from around here, are you kid?
There's a bunch of signs pointing the way.
(to himself)
Assuming they haven't been destroyed by bandits...
(to Cyn)
Oh yeah! Watch out for bandits!
Hold on. I'm going, I'm going. Relax. I can be a little dense sometimes, but not enough to pick a fight with someone who can throw a lumbering oaf across the room like it's nothing — which, by the way, was hot as hell!
I couldn't figure out how to deliver the "hot as hell" line but I think you got pretty close.
I'm sure there's a better way to have deliver it, seems like there's always something better for everything.. But I'm pretty happy with how it turned out in the end. Do wish I had emoted a bit more on the previous lines though looking back on it.... :/ Anyway, I appreciate the kind words and all that my man.