Hey William! Once again, your powerful and low voice REALLY brings the heat in this take! The energy and projection are on-point and excellent as always. It feels like you might be some kind of general who is angry at the results of a disaster from the past, and I can really dig that! My recommendation for you is to add a more complex array of emotions to your read, making your voice softer at times and slowing your pace down to emphasize more emotional areas. You did this near the end very nicely, but it's just a thought! Very good read, keep up the amazing work!