Oooohh! This sounds like a prelude to an epic rallying cry. By the end of your monologue, I could feel a sort of tension or desperation building up and it left me anticipating what would come next! The way you expressed the emotions from the monologue allowed me to have a clear picture of what (I think) is happening! I loved it!

I really like your tone in this take! Wonderfully done. My main feedback for you is to take the read a bit softer, adding a layer of emotion. You hinted at this emotion at "they couldn't have been more wrong," and that was phenomenal! And the energy you show at the end is really well done. Adding some kind of build-up would really add to this script. Well done, this was a great one!