Hi Roderick! No worries whatsoever, I'm getting to these feedbacks rather late myself. Your voice sounds great in this take! Very low and powerful. I would love it if you picked up your projection even more. Also, don't be afraid to slow down and nail that articulation. Add in some more character-depth through emphasis and pausing, and that will also heighten the emotions that we could be feeling with this script. Overall, you did such a nice job!