Hi Rama! I really liked your read! There were a few lines that fell a little flat of emotion, mostly in the very beginning. These first lines sounded more fit for a narration, so if that was the intention then I think you did a good job with that! That said, there were definitely more lines than not that I felt you put real emotion into from a more character-based perspective. I really liked those!

Hey Rama! I like the softer voice you use here, it makes it sound like your character really was apart of this futuristic issue. Your emotion really picked up in the middle of the read, so try and find ways to incorporate those feelings even at the beginning. Articulation is nice, breathing is good, and I'm overall impressed! Great work!