(don't know if i need to mention this, but...) I pictured someone from one of the space colonies. Their war for independence was before his lifetime, and he sees his colony getting closer to civil war. I imagine him reflecting to himself on how they, his colony and humanity, got to this point.

I like the direction you took here Fredrick! It feels like a voice over during a sequence where this guy is "narrating" himself writing in a journal. Slightly despondent at the state of things, resigned and calm at the same time. That said, I would love to get more exploration of how this guy feels about some of the events that have taken place. Does he detest the fact that there was a second great space age? Does he blame human nature for the re-emergence of war in space? Does he hold any hope for the future? Right noe, he is a still monotone delivery and I feel adding in that emotion can really kick it up another level! Well done my guy! P.S Woulda loved to hear it through the "old man voice as well lol

Hi Fredrick! Your soft voice works well to really bring the character to life in this script. My main feedback for you is to take a bit to slow down and take the read at a steadier pace. Your articulation is fine but doing so will definitely help it reach greater heights! I like how you added the details to this individual's story in the comments, it definitely sheds some light on who this person is. You're a great storyteller! Keep up the good work, I'm excited to see you improve even more!