Hey Marcos! I like the campfire idea, telling a story about the terrible past and whatnot. On that note, I feel that adding more variance to your voice would make your performance feel more realistic. Slowing down, adding a softer tone to some of your sentences, and then building up energy in other areas of the script...these would all help make it feel more like a genuine character is telling this narrative. Overall though, great work here, excited to see you continue to improve!