Hi Robert! Your articulation is extremely crisp, well done on that front. I like your energy, but it feels like your read is the same from the beginning to end on an emotional level. I don't feel like your character in this read is as real as he could be if you were to change up and add some pauses, breaks, more emphasis, etc. The seeds of those things are there, but by working on those aspects I would definitely feel a stronger performance. Great job though, keep it up!