Thank you so much for doing the homework. Was very creative for sure and while I love your storyline - but happened is that it sounded like you were READING IT OUT TO YOUR FATHER, instead of speaking off the top of his mind. Most clients won't want someone to be nervous about their company. The want to come across as the best solution in the world, so while this is super creative and you honored your story line, I would assume this is NOT animation - there is nothing in here to suggest otherwise. This is not promo either - this is narration which typically requires pro with natural. Again you owned your storyline and that is what counts, but you also want to stand out with a winning audition and the client wouldn't likely want to come across this way. Good efforts here though