I love the way you read this, actually. It's as if you are the voice of the innocence that's been lost, the dreams that got shattered. You emote very well!

Your clarity is absolutely phenomenal! Thank you for really focusing in on this important aspect of VO. I think you could add just a bit more emotional variance by sometimes softening your voice and adding more of an emotional moment to specific parts of your story, but aside from that, your energy and voice fit this script SO so well! Well done, Ciara, you've done a wonderful job this semester and I can't wait to see where you go from here!