Hi Birdie! I like the soft and "bittersweet" voice you use in this read. It really sets the tone in a wonderful way! I recommend slowing down just a bit while reading out specific sentences to really focus on your articulation, but overall your clarity was solid. My favorite part of your performance is that sometimes you would add in more of a "sad" voice, while at other times you would emphasize the "narration" of the story you are putting forth. Absolutely well done, Birdie, it was a pleasure having you this semester!