I like your Cate Blanchett style read here! It fits the script exceptionally well, I can definitely envision hearing this at the start of an epic movie. I recommend adding a bit more emotional variance here; "they couldn't be more wrong" could perhaps have been done as more of a whisper, or with a slightly softer or more somber voice, and later on you could have resumed your stoic and narration-style voice. Work on ways to add details that can make your voice stand out even more! I've loved your work over this semester, you should be proud!