I thought you did a good job with keeping consistent energy and emotion. Also, I need to know your breathing technique because I could barely hear it, lol. With the theme of homework being pacing, that was consistent along with your articulation. Having a hard time coming up with constructive critique at the moment...

I really like your voice here! It sounds sad but also with a hint of happiness, almost like you miss the time before everything got "complicated." I recommend slowing down just a tad; your articulation was mostly good, but sometimes felt a but rushed or blurred together. Your read was powerful and emotional, which can be hard to do in a narration-style script like this. Absolutely well done, and phenomenal work this semester!