Loved how you included the beginning part- I can definitely see how that translated into the character you portrayed through the read! Your read made me smile throughout!

I like your improv at the beginning, it added a lot! Leading into your script in that natural way and letting us enter your story was a fantastic idea. Great stuff. Your articulation was solid! I do think you could perhaps add a bit of a subtle change to your voice throughout, maybe sometimes softening a bit, or suddenly becoming more passionate about a particular topic, but you actually do this really well! Keep working on the things you are already good at, while also finding new ways to bring your voice to life. Fabulous work, and thank you for a wonderful semester!