Very well done! Your articulation was great! I can really envision the character you described!

Your pacing is perfect, here! It really emphasizes the severity of the situation you are talking about; I can imagine hearing this at the start of a grand movie or something similar. I recommend working on adding a bit more of a genuine, passionate feeling to your read. This sounded perhaps just a bit too much like someone reading a script and trying to be dramatic; find ways to make your read change throughout instead of being one same voice all throughout. Overall, fantastic job, and fantastic work throughout this semester! Keep working hard from here!