Hey Erik - thank you so much for your introduction. Now lets change it up a bit so it doesn't sound like you are STATING your name as an introduction. YOU TOTALLY Sound like you are introducing yourself to me in a professional meeting - can't knock you for that - however you are about to be a demon king - so what is professional about that? Next time - answer ME asking you the question, WHO THE HELL ARE YOU? and have fun with telling me what your name is. I want to hear that you love what you do, that you're proud of yourself and that you're a ton of fun to work with - within the boundaries of your authentic personality. Thank you for the opening ah hah hah. I love the character here but the opening and closing ah hah hah, really need to be a bit more LET GO or natural. It sounds a bit fake so working on letting go that way. I love the character voice for the demon - as it's not too scary but kind of just animated. Great character for animation and you played with him. The other thing to consider is that this is supposed to be the SAME PERSON basically but with an evil side so the person who is going to nail this audition is someone who will showcase that this is the same character with multiple personality. So that's the other gem to consider with this kind of direction and most of you will miss that. The true backstory is that this character is morphing into different personalities (2) while in conversation, so that would sound differently than what we're hearing. All we see is - oh it has to be two characters. So just having a bit more of that in there would help the scene. But these characters DO NOT sound like the same guy so you might want to add a layer of some kind of similarity so the audience knows it's supposed to be ONE person. Good stuff otherwise