Thank you for the slate Daniel. It's good. Now we just want to add some flavor and fun to it - so play with your name next time - don't worry about telling me what you're auditioning for - but just your name for now....your slate is very cordial - and I think that suits your personality very well, but we want to also sound like we love what we're doing and are having such a great time and they are LUCKY to be hearing your audition today (without arrogance but instead an INTERNAL excitement about what you get to do for a living) Love that you gave me a nice opening - just work on that laugh being more organic for the character. It's got a bit of fake context to it so be careful with that. Love that your two characters sound like the same person but is there a way you could have shown that one character MORPH'S into another. While I love your backstory of what you are relating to, you are missing a very important element (as most of you will) this is ONE CHARACTER morphing into another - multiple personality - most of you sound like the scene is just two different characters. So that would help layer in that important element the client would be listening for in this audition. Love the characters - just want to know more about the storyline based on how you morph from one to the other. Imagine how that would really be. That's the true backstory is that you have multiple personality....and either know it or you don't.