Awe - LOVED your slate - nice work - totally you and fun! So glad this was fun. Loved your character and little extra's nice - that's the way to bring this to life. You added a great speed to this and did a great job editing that together so that the scene moved. Some great stuff. Loved that he interrupted etc. love that. I would just suggest more PHYSICAL action in the scene. This was awesome. Really loved hearing you in this light - One of your better submissions for sure. You are just totally starting to let go - loved the button at the end. This is the way to stand out. I might want to direct the characters just a little bit more in some choices, but you will have shown me that you know what you're doing and you're having a great time - good work

Great slate! I loved the voices you gave these characters. Always great with the clarity. I liked some of the overlap of the voices, but others didn't quite make sense to me. It seemed too interrupted at times.