She originally didn't even have a line, but I felt this project needed a female somewhere. I like what I'm hearing, but I need it to sound a bit more forceful. Your father is ready to kill your boyfriend's brother, and you're the only person who can stop him. If you're willing, I can take this down and you can try again, or you can audition again and I'll ignore this... not sure how this site works, I'm used to another format. :)