Lucid Series Season 1
atobehunter for Paul
Paul is best friend of Lucy and very loyal; Mainly a kind person; can be stern at times.
Remember that these characters change identities from day to day without acknowledging it. Identiy includes: age, name, and hair color. Paul becomes a moderator of these dreams part way through the series. So, he knows what's going on and is looking out for his friends. Though, doesn't quite know if what he remembers is real.
Voice I'm looking for: Deeper, mature, in partial control, but not a booming voice. What would make sense with the general design, which may change.
(Lucy) and (Paul): **Laughing**
(Lucy): Thanks, it’s been awhile since I’ve laughed that much.
(Paul): Well, Jack was a bit of idiot, so you can’t give me the credit.
(Lucy): **Laughs** This day has just been going so well… and then to top it off, meeting you again.
(Paul): What are friends for? We should hang more!
(Lucy): Yeah, we should. **Looks out window; sees house** Oh! **Bus stops at bus stop; Lucy gets up** See you again!
(Paul): Yep! **Shakes his head**
Julie (Lucy): **Gives him slip**
Mr. Simple (Paul): Ah, thank you, take a seat. **Waits for Lucy to begin walking; curious** Now, you shouldn’t have been late today…
Julie (Lucy): **Silently and aggressively takes her seat**
Mr. Simple (Paul): **Eager interest** Julie, please why were you late?
Julie (Lucy): **Annoyed** It’s none of your business!
Mr. Simple (Paul): **Relaxing** Alright, so onward…
Buyer (Vince): How much for this one?
Grandpa (Paul): Three Five ones.
Buyer (Vince): A bit much.
Grandpa (Paul): **Shrugs** We all need to eat.
Vince reaches into one of his pockets, pulling out some money, handing it to Paul, carrying the bowl away. Turns to stare at Lucy.
Buyer (Vince): **Looking stern** Have a nice day.
Lucy is confused, then looks at Paul, who seems to become anxious by this, now.
Delila (Lucy): Are you okay?
Grandpa (Paul): **Nervous; stern** Fine… but perhaps you should leave for home.
Delila (Lucy): Why?
Grandpa (Paul): **Insistent; commanding** Go.
Pretty good, but it does sound like you're making Paul sound seductive, for some reason. The tone seems better for William, I'd say, but perhaps not. Your voice is a bit higher pitched than I was thinking for Paul, but I'd have to hear some others to say for sure.
I'd say the seductiveness was mainly you were adding too much grandeur to Paul's voice, which wasn't needed until the Go. The "Go" like did work fine.
Ah. Thanks for your input! I can definitely augment the voice any way that's needed. The seductiveness wasn't exactly what I was going for, but I kinda see what you're saying upon further re-listening.
It was an especially creepy tone, as Mr. Simple he was her teacher in that scene. Oh my...