I will say thanks you for showing interest in this project. To give some right away feed back. Your stage and story narrations are rather good, though your last narration (the long one) goes by maybe a bit too fast and so some of the acting in it feels a bit lacking or I guess rushed. Over all its above decent and again the shorter single line parts you did great. Also impressive you nailed all the Japanese names more or less, especially Shinmyomaru.