Middle-aged Coworker *Skit for Song* (PAID)
Saz for Middle-aged Coworker (Smoker)
The setting is outside of the shop I work at, within the vicinity of a power plant, and I and a coworker are standing at the designated smoking area just beside the building. You will portray my middle-aged (40-year-old range) who is obviously a smoker, sharing in the excitement of me being invited to perform across the country.
Since he's a smoker, I prefer the actor to have/use a raspier voice like that of an older man smoker. You will also have to pretend as if you are smoking throughout these lines.
Please do your best!
*you approach me, noticing that I'm staring at my phone screen with excitement*
"Whatcha got there? Get some good news? *smokes cigarette* Don’t let the boss catch you on that thing." (referring to my phone)*I inform you of the invitation to go on tour for my music*
*chokes up for a second on the smoke saying, "Oh,"*
*read the rest normally* "well damn son. That's awesome! You gonna do it?"
"Well when you get famous, don’t forget about your buddies at the plant!"
*referring to the power plant that I work at*
*one last toke before putting out the cigarette and walking away*
Not bad. Your voice would be perfect for anime or a comic dub. But not quite the old man smoker voice I'm looking for, you sound like your just speaking with your normal voice and you don't sound much older than me lol
Fair thanks for the feedback. Hope you find the voice you're looking for.
I hope you didn't take my feedback the wrong way, cuz you're definitely talented! Just not what I'm looking for on this project specifically, mainly cuz you don't sound quite old enough. But your acting and voice are perfect otherwise! I'd actually like to keep you in mind for other projects
Nah mate, I didn't take it like that at all. The voice I auditioned with wasn't what you were looking for and that's completely fine. I would be happy to help with anything you think I'd be good for.