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helenblossom for Ari
Salty, smart, too much sass for this world, cynical and somewhat disconnected but she cares about people. She's got the best one-liners. She knows what she's talking about. She is 18... kinda? Okay, ya see the thing is she's a vampire with a hell of an attitude. She was 18 in Feudal Japan so... Yeah. Her voice is lower and somewhat gruff when she sings her voice is smoother and she has the remnants of a British accent that come out more when she's upset, she spent most of her time running away from the cult that raised her in Britain and now she's a resident of the Ferais Campus Forest. (You high key don't have to meet every little thing, just put some punch in what she says.) You should also do a little improv for this one, sing a bit if you can.
Wait - wait, lemme get this straight, you were tricked by an acid trip kitten?
(breathless taunting) Come and get it fur brains!
(terrified and frantic) Oh god, I'm sorry, I panicked. They found out... I was sloppy and now th-they know and they're after us and we have to go. NOW!
(Ah, ignore this. I forgot to improvise -_-)
Even if you forgot to improvise, this is really good! I do have a few notes, though. I realize I didn't add this before but when she's saying come and get it furbrains she's running from Kasey, the said acid trip kitten. Meaning if you can, I'd like for you to try and play up some breathlessness and spunk behind that one. I love how you do it, but I also want to see the line with some context, I think you'll do great with that. I also really like your accent. Is it real, because if it isn't, you have quite the talent.
Oh, okay! Thank you for the feedback. Honestly, I don't think I did very well as it was my first shot at voice acting. My accent is natural, as I fail at almost all accents I try. Would you like me to try and redo that line? I'm not sure if it will be great, but I could try to improve with the points you've made.
You don't have to redo it if you don't want to, but for your first time as a VA you're really good! My first time trying voice acting wasn't nearly as fitting or emotion filled as yours. If you do it again, you can improvise too! Just do anything you think'd fit the character. And if you don't mind me asking, where are you from? I know it's a weird question and you don't have to answer if you don't want to. I just think it'd be a nice little factoid to know where such a lovely accent is from. Also, the whole doing accents from other places thin takes a lot of practice. I've only gotten good at a few and that took months if not years. Just keep up the good work.
Thank you! I'll redo it and post it later today. As for my accent, I'm from England. Specifically an Essex accent as different counties have different accents (for example, the stereotypical accent is from around London, I believe, but I'm not too sure)