This sounds fantastic! I love the energy you give to the role. My only bit of critique is that you sounded a bit too fast in the second line, but that's easily fixable. Amazing job!
Thank you! Like you said, easily fixable with the second line. More than happy to work at until until it's perfect for what you're looking for!
I say it's good as it is, but if you want to do a retake on the line, go for it. But overall, it's really good!
I'd be happy to do some retakes if cast or shortlisted. If it's just a matter of speed, that's something I can do no problem! :)
Alrighty, sounds good to me. Love the professional vibe you're giving off, I like that in VAs.