Not bad. I would disqualify this, however, because of the background noise but it seems you made attempts to remove it which shows that, given a little more effort by either me or you it can be removed entirely. The effort given is really great as well, and I can see from the effort alone that you've done voice acting before. Bravo. Your voice is also a perfect match for how I envision Kiwa, so you might get cast soon. I'll have to deliberate.
Thank you!
Apologies, but we decided to go with someone else.