To me it sounds like you are trying a bit too hard to alter your voice and inflexion. Can you give me a more natural take?
Sure, I'll gladly do a few more takes
Voice Actor
Character description: Rio Ranger is a doll created with primarily negative traits. He feels bitterness and inferiority towards humans, to the point that he relishes in their suffering. He appears in "Your Time to Shine" as a radio announcer, making him a very small role.
Voice concept: Ranger has the appearance of a teenage boy, and thus his voice would most likely be that of a young man. His sadistic and condescending characteristics (as well as swearing) need to be incorporated.
[You can add as much swearing as you like to your audition, for example swapping "stuff" with "shit", adding "bastards" to any of his lines, etc.]
Hey, bastards! It's the Rio Ranger Station, bringing you some hot survival tips!
You ever see wood on the ground around the base? Pick that stuff up!
Foraging has the highest odds of injury! 'Course, if you just coop up indoors, you'll die.
