Hmmm. I can't say I dislike this, but I think a little more emotion should be shown. The pitch is perfect though. But more emotion is needed. The listener will be listening to you throughout most of the story, after all. It should be given a little more attention than most. If you could re-audition showing me your best here, I'll more heavily consider this audition. Nonetheless, I will put your name on a document for consideration when either the deadline comes and goes or sufficient auditions have been submitted. Thanks for the interest!
Apologies, but this role has been cast to someone else! Thank you for your interest! Make sure to keep tabs on this project, as it will be continuously updated as it progresses!