Nightmares - The Dreamer 2 - A Gacha Club Mini Movie
justsomguy for Liam Valley
Liam is the main character of this mini movie. He avoids talking to people at all times due to the fear of him becoming a murderer. He wishes that he could talk to people, but he saw his mom almost kill him and actually kill his dad just because she loved them. So Liam doesn't want to take any risks. Because he never talks to anyone, he is socially awkward.
Liam has a medium-range voice. If he was a singer, he would be a baritone. Because he never speaks, his voice is a little raspy.
(Low Tone, Almost Regretful, But Angered) Stupid family... They're all going to end up dead one day...
(Sighs and thinks the following) I hate this. (Pause) No. I hate everything. (Each line grows in volume and anger) I hate myself. I hate not being able to make friends. I hate not being able to ever date anyone. (Out loud/yelling) I HATE Ruth Smith!!! (Pause to catch breath, then start crying) Why was I cursed enough to survive my mom's murder attempt? I don't want to live like this. (Slight pause to wipe away tears) I wonder if other people are this miserable when they are alone.
(Happy) I have to admit, today was wonderful.
This was pretty good, but I do have a few things that I would like to give you some feedback on. You made Liam sound a lot more nasally than I imagined him to be especially towards the end (if you don't know what that means, it basically means you talked more with your nose). I also noticed that there were a few points where it didn't seem like you knew the lines very well. Feel free to do a re-audition if you would like, but if not, that is completely fine as well. Good job, and keep up the good work!
thanks for the feedback, so you more of a medium deep?
Sorry for the late response. Yeah, it probably is more medium deep. Just make sure it's not so nasally.