Cartoon I am creating (There's no name yet...)
Raine for Mandi
Mandi is seen by everyone as the cool girl and she's always invited to parties. She tends to be very devious and she pesters Paul for his neat and tidy habits. Her personality is very playful and laid back, much like Q. She is also the possible love interest for Paul..
(after experinceing some voodoo crap) Well Paul, even though I'm a little pissed at you, that was some immpresive voodoo crap.
(to Paul after her ex leaves) Hey, um, thanks for getting rid of him. He was always really sensitive.
(after pulling a brilliant prank on Paul) Oh my god! Paul, that was hilarious! You were like, oh my gah- and then BOOSH! (continues laughing)
Awesome job! I do have one note for you. I really like what you did, but if you can I think we could try giving Mandi a louder personality. I like the tone you did for the second line though. All in all great work! If you would like to contact me to talk about the cartoon or chat email me at [email protected].
Yeah I can try to be louder/more energetic next time :'D