The Last Sentients
VioletTrickster for Wess
Wess is the leader of the underground city little Rada. He has a cynical view of the world after what happened to his family. He refuses to let people do as they please to his city. He plans to recruit more young adults and kids to his cause. He refuses to trust adults.
(Laughs tauntingly) You heard me old timer. The queen is always so great right? Na, I wonder what she’d think if she knew the kinds of things happening around her kingdom. (cynical)
Because… you look like someone that had something taken from them. Whatever if you want to find me head to the markets and look for shroud.
Oh, and lose the dusters. (Taunts)
Violet#5696
So for feedback I like the pacing and your voice has a strong tone, but it is difficult to hear the emotions in the lines you delivered. It sounds like the character is sad when he should me more cocky, arrogant and yet commanding.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll take this to heart and take time to work more on conveying my emotions better while voice acting :D
No problem and good luck!