Any feedback would be nice so I can improve
I love the portray you gave of the character, the audio quality could use some work also most of the takes seemed to have the same energy, you could always stick with one take of each line. also although he is a washed-up adult you could give him a bit more energy, like Chris Pratt in that goblin magic movie. Enunciation could also work because it's slightly mumbled but your take gives more realism like he is not trying to be formal in any way. In all, I thought It was a great take, I hope you get it!!!
thanks for the feedback and I am still working on audio stuff, I'm trying to learn as much as I can with audio and seeing what works for me. I also wasn't sure how much energy to give him since when I play Stardew I don't interact with people and I didn't want to give too much energy.