Your voice sounds a bit younger than what I'm looking for, and the tone is a little... I'm not sure if I should say energetic? Keiji is a chill sort of character. The "wahaha" was a little out of sync with the rest of the line about Megumi. If you don't already, I'd recommend reading the line before you record it, or retaking it if you notice you messed up the tone. I can hear your mic popping, and I can tell you were trying to be quiet with the "I'll kill you." line. Nice job otherwise though! Thanks for the audition!
Thank you for the feedback, I can try deepening the tone a little bit more. The wahaha part I can retry as if I was trying to do Alucard from Hellsing. WIth the Ill kill you part I was trying to show I was slowing giving into rage. I can try again with a normal angry tone then going to loud vs quite loud to loud. Let me know if you want retakes.
Sure, retakes would be great if you have the time!