Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
JYorke for Mustadio Bunansa
"A young man from Goug Machine City, he seeks to learn of the mysterious machines hidden beneath his beloved city. Skilled with a gun, this sharpshooter is quick with both his wits and feet."
Age: 17
Voice Type/Personality: Medium. Confident, Witty, a bit rash.
[to those pursuing him]
I have a message for your keeper, Ludovich (Loo-doe-vitch)! Tell him that if he lays so much as a finger on my father, he'll never see the auracite again!
[describing his gun]
What, this? This is a weapon called a "pistol." It uses an explosive powder to propel a metal projectile toward its target. This one is of simple make. There were once pistols said to fire projectiles infused with magicks.
[embarassed while giving someone he likes a present]
Yes. Y-you're always busy fighting, and...and...Well, I know you've probably small time for such womanly things, but...I thought m-mayhap you might like to have that.
Your 1st and 2nd lines were overemphasized, but more the 1st than the latter. On the second line, he should be speaking matter-of-factly, kind of like "this isn't much of a big deal". As for your 3rd line, I would not believe you were speaking to someone you liked based on the emotion you brought. It sounded more like you were slightly nervous for a job interview instead of trying to give a gift to a crush. Thank you for your audition.
Thank you for the feedback! I certainly appreciate it.