Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
oddlytrajic for Argath Thadolfus
"A knight apprentice in service to the marquis of Limberry. Arrogant and short-tempered, Argath believes commoners to be no more than fodder for the noble class."
Age: 16
Voice Type & Personality: Medium High to Medium Low. Arrogant, Brash, Noble. (I'd prefer an accent to match his noble stature)
My name is Argath, a knight in His Excellency the marquis Elmdore (mar-key Elm-door) de Limberry's household. Well, truth be told, I am a knight apprentice. As are you, if I'm not mistaken.
[solemnly recounting his family's history]
My own house was once respected as highly as House Beoulve (Bay-oolve), you know. At least, until my grandfather was captured during the war. He turned traitor, thinking to buy his freedom with the lives of his friends. But his freedom scarce outlived his honor. He was not a dozen paces out their gate when the dagger found his back. Killed by some common squire, no more a knight than I.
[egging his comrade on to finish an enemy]
Do it, Ramza! She fights as a Corpse. Let her become one for true! She's a foe and a traitor - an enemy of House Beoulve! The world has no place for such wretches. Her claim to life is forfeit! Spare her now, and you place your seal on the warrants for our own deaths! It's her or us, Ramza! Strike her down!
Thank you for your audition, but there are a lot of things you need to work on before you send in another audition. You slur your words so it's hard to make out what you say sometimes in addition to adding words unnecessarily. What threw me off was your sudden change in voice in the middle of your second line, so your voice could not stay consistent. You also mispronounced words, especially the ones I gave pronunciations for. And your last line lacked any sense of emotion to it. You were reading the lines, not acting. Learn the craft and I'm sure you'll nail future auditions.